The relationship to my material was the main part of the composing part of my essay. Each one of my essays was about a important thing in my life which made it fairly simplke to write about. The way i revised my essay was actually the sam trechnique ill use for any other revision i reread what iw rote and try to refelect even more on what i am reading because it makes me think more abnout that particular day or time i was writing about.